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Show me beauty
    I don't get in the day
Give me hope
    I lack in the sun
Give me company
    as my world sleeps
Teach me silence
    no one takes
Listen to words
    I've never spoken
Don't reply
    to questions answered
Allow thoughts
    as much as dreams
Give light
     when no one wants to see
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I've always felt a connection with the moon. A little ironic if you're into astrology, I am a leo, child of the sun.
A few years ago I spent a lot of time looking at it when I should have been sleeping.
I don't really pray to the moon, if you were curious.
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*iceofwolf Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Simple and concise, and I particularly like the last two lines.
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:iconi-lie:
Thank you :)
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~artlunatic23 Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice poem.
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:iconi-lie:
Thank you :)
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~artlunatic23 Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome.
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~Squirrelshters Apr 4, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the moon :) Really good poem! :hug:
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:iconi-lie:
Awe shucks, Thanks! -^^-
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~Squirrelshters Apr 5, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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~4biddendonut Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Im a cancer ruled by the moon and I can tell you, I definitely feel the connection to it. More so the ocean though... Which is probably why I hate where I live so much lol... anyway this is a great work.
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Thank you!
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